Homework Task

Original text written in a Colloquial Register :

The very first iPhone introduced the world to the idea of touch as the most natural way to interact with a smartphone. Touch to hear a song. Touch to browse the web. Touch to take a picture. All of it began with something perfectly simple: your finger. And now we’ve taken touch to the next logical place with Touch ID, the fingerprint identity sensor. Your fingerprint is the perfect password. You always have it with you. And no one can ever guess what it is. But beyond that, it just made sense to us that your phone should recognise you. It should learn you, not require you to memorise and enter passwords in order to use it. We also knew the right place to locate the sensor was where you naturally touch your iPhone — on the Home button. But how could we fit all the technology that sensors require in such a small space?   

Same text written in an Intimate Register :

Do you remember that first iPhone we had? It was all so different us. To listen to your Beyonce album,to order that pair of shoes you always wanted, to take a picture on your nights out,all with just a touch. But I know you want even more, so now you can have Touch ID. One thing that makes you so special is your fingerprint,and you'll always have it with you. It's for you and no-one else. But I still demand more for you. Your phone should recognise that face, and learn your likes and dislikes. You don't deserve the trouble of memorising your password to use your phone. We thought we'd locate the sensor where it's easy for you,where you've always known it,the Home button. Is that enough for you honey?